No no no, this simply won't do. For something that's said to represent the Milky Way, it doesn't look anything like it. Did you even take Astronomy in school? No, seriously, I want to know. If you did, you would know just how off you are with the colors of it on this one. The perspective with the poses and the horizon is off, and on top of that, the horses' fur/hair are extremely undetailed, with the only positive being that they have different poses. The background trees and fireflies, however, nail the coffin to this picture; there's shorthand drawing and then there's just plain laziness. Learn the difference and try to improve next time.
Never wanted to copy the Milky Way.
Geez, where do I begin with this one. For something that must've sounded like an all right idea on paper, you sure missed the execution. For starters, the color scheme is too monochrome for what's going on in the foreground; something like love is meant to have more colors than just stark orange. The tail is too bunched up, the detail ratio of foreground to background is all over the place (Detailed clouds but matte horizon? Come on), and the shadow casting doesn't match up with the poses at all. It doesn't even look like it! It seems that for every step forward you take with your art, you take 3 steps back, and the fact that you still insist on drawing OC characters (One of the lowest forms of "art"), doesn't help.
Commission still means, someone pays me to draw their idea/vision of a picture. He paid me, I did it, he loved it. And he wanted to include HIS 'O'riginal 'C'haracter Tech, the red one on the left.
Reusing the same design as in your previous creepy piece? For shame. I'd say that you've pretty much rendered this picture moot by this decision. And again, where is the background to this? What's the story? If bright pictures for your own twisted desires are all you care to draw, then you're a pretty shallow artist. The shadows have improved a bit, but that's not enough of a saving grace. Surely you can do better.
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So it wasn't so moot from my viewpoint. ^^
What exactly are you trying to say with this? A female anthro horse is dressed up in a certain way and another one is aroused by it. You call it cute. Really? You find sexual predation cute? I could go on about how the leg cutoff adds nothing to the piece and the balance of color to shadow makes it hard to look at, but the nature of the picture in conjunction with the title says it all. It's disgusting thoughts like "Rape is cute" that hold artists back, especially in this case, and if you want to become a better artist, you need to change your ways. This is the most offensive picture you've ever drawn.
Your twisted thoughts made me laugh really hard! xD
The lack of detail in the background is so off-putting, and the computer itself is severely unfinished. It's as if you just put a few parts of one picture together and never finished them. On top of that, the glow effect on the horn is very poorly done, almost as if it was made in MS Paint. Perhaps you should spend more time on your work, so that you can improve your quality.
I find it really amusing, that you're going out of your way by writing super long critique-like sounding reviews instead of just insulting me like before, after you absence of a few weeks.
Oh and btw, MS Paint is not capable of a glow effect that would resemble the one in the picture, not even almost.
It would be a surprise if MLP crap wasn't your every other upload.
sounds like you hate surprises then hahah!
BEST ART EVER
this is now about zootopia, i had the inside scoop before anyone else
Both lifelike and surreal at the same time. Very nice.
Cheers Zero, I've always appreciated your critique for my artwork and I appreciate the feedback.
That's pretty much tracing. This shouldn't even be on here.
Way to screw up the proportions and completely ignore the existence of the color wheel.
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